Hi Hugh
All looks good......
Thought I would reply as there was none on your last post a few days ago....
My only advise would be to use a low ESR capacitor in the charge pump area .... pins 6 & 5....nothing but squarewaves there...
This might be interesting reading
https://www.avnet.com/wps/portal/abacus/resources/engineers-insight/article/understanding-esr-in-electrolytic-capacitors/Also for the fast diode use a known one say from mouser / digikey
Avoid ones from China as a while ago now the ones I ordered were fakes and it blow up destroying extra components....etc:
For the heatsink the photo attached could give you some ideas...its not a PWM but a switcher .....
Only some thoughts thats all.....
Wayne
PS: found it important to ground the heatsink assembly from my experience anyway.....